请帮忙完善一下我的英语自我介绍,小升初面试要用.

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请帮忙完善一下我的英语自我介绍,小升初面试要用.
Heleo ereryone!My name is Wang Shuo .I'm from Yong an lu school.My English teacher is Mrs chen.I like English and reading books.This is me.Thang you very much.
有点短,也不算很具体...
Heleo ereryone!My name is Wang Shuo .I'm from Yong an lu school.My English teacher is Mrs chen.I like English and reading books.There are three people in my family.My father,my mother and me.My father is a doctor.My mother is a teacher.I am a studen.This is me.Thang you very much.
刚刚少了点...

加上年龄、喜欢的动物、为什么喜欢这个动物、介绍一下你的家庭组成、喜欢的运动.多用“I think……”会更好能帮忙用英语加上点吗?我13,喜欢狗,我喜欢的运动是武术或者是打羽毛球,都可以。Heleo ereryone!My name is Wang Shuo .I'm from Yong an lu school.I'm 13 years old.My English teacher is Mrs chen.She is a great teacher!I like English and reading books.There are three people in my family.My father,my mother and me.My father is a doctor.My mother is a teacher.I really love my parents,they're good to me.I like dogs.I think dogs are very frendly animals.I want to make frends with them.And I like Zhongguo Gongfu,because I think our country is very great! I loce my country! This is me.Thanks.Zhongguo Gonfu 能不用拼音吗