改正下基本的语法句法错误there is a viewpoint agree that the tobacco industry is not only a kind of enterprise, but also related with the tobacco planter, printing, the papermaking and others,once the ban is published, it will cause the unemployment rate sudden growth,furthermore,tobacco's tax is our country important origin, hold a major part in our country tax.therefore banned smoking is not realistic.

there is a viewpoint that the tobacco industry is not only a kind of enterprise, but also related with the tobacco planter, printing, papermaking and others.once the ban is published, it will causes sudden growth of the unemployment rate.furthermore, taxes of tobacco is our country’s important financial support, which
holds a major part in our country taxes.therefore,bans of smoking is of no realistic.