能看一下我句话,英文这么说对吗?

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能看一下我句话,英文这么说对吗?
Brenda told me that the meeting on 11 Mar will take audio conference instead.No need to book Video conference room.
May I book Room 001 for you?

Brenda告诉我三月11号的会议被音频会议代替了.没有必要定有视频会议的房间
我能为您定001号房么?