麻烦帮我看看这篇英语短文,修改一下错误的地方
问题描述：
麻烦帮我看看这篇英语短文,修改一下错误的地方
This a photo of my family.He is my father.He is very hunmourous.That is my mother,and she is a teacher.She is talking with my consin.Those are my two cousins.The old man is wearing glasses.He had grizzled hair.He is my grandpa.
We are in the park had fine day!
答
The old man is wearing glasses改为The elder man is wearing glasses.
He had grizzled hair.改为He has grizzled hair.
We are in the park had fine day! 改为We are in the park and have fine day!
要保持全文时态的一致