大家帮我看看,这篇英语作文有哪些错误?（非常感谢）My hobby is reading books.I often read books in free time.It makes me know a lot.I'm really enjoy reading and I think reading can helps me with my study.and I've been collecting all kinds books for three years.Also,l have more than thirty of them.Some are outstanding compasitions,some are interesting stories,others are famous sayings.And l want to make a friend who also lieks reading.Then we can reading together,and l think it
大家帮我看看,这篇英语作文有哪些错误?（非常感谢）
My hobby is reading books.I often read books in free time.It makes me know a lot.I'm really enjoy reading and I think reading can helps me with my study.and I've been collecting all kinds books
for three years.Also,l have more than thirty of them.Some are outstanding compasitions,some are interesting stories,others are famous sayings.And l want to make a friend who also lieks reading.Then we can reading together,and l think it will be happier,too.
没什么大的错误,一些动词形式写错了,单词拼错,有破句,总之我在你原文上直接修改了,请看：
My hobby is reading books.I often read books in my free time.It makes me know a lot.I really enjoy reading and think reading can help me with my study,and I've been collecting all kinds of books
for three years. I have more than thirty books now.Some are outstanding compositions, some are interesting stories, and some are about famous sayings. l want to make a friend who also likes reading. Then we can read together, and l think it will be funny as well.