修改英语作文,看看有没有错?在睡公主城堡上 这个词组怎么写?Dream In *My dream was come true.Last weekeng,I went to * on vacation.I thought * was a really beautiful city and fell in love with it.Third day in *,we went to Disneylang.I had a grea time,although the weather wa very hot.In Disneyland,I met Mickey Mouse,Donald Duck and many other famous Disney characters.Perhaps you have even see them in movies,bue I saw them in front of me!And I saw Disn

修改英语作文,看看有没有错?
在睡公主城堡上 这个词组怎么写?
Dream In *
My dream was come true.
Last weekeng,I went to * on vacation.I thought * was a really beautiful city and fell in love with it.Third day in *,we went to Disneylang.I had a grea time,although the weather wa very hot.In Disneyland,I met Mickey Mouse,Donald Duck and many other famous Disney characters.Perhaps you have even see them in movies,bue I saw them in front of me!And I saw Disney Cruise ,Disney movies and played roller coaster!You can imagine how interesting it was!I took lots of photos in Disneyland and especially took a photo with Donald Duck!But I was very regretful that I couldn’t took a photo with Mickey Mouse,because it had the most people took a photo with he!At night,we saw that beautiful fireworks(在睡公主城堡上 ).And finally,I bought many Disney souveenirs.That’s wonderful!
In *,I saw many tall buildings and many foreigners.And I went to a big store saw many beautiful clothes and many beautiful souvenirs.Then,we went sightseeing * Island,Victoria Harbor and many other famous places.I also took many photos.I thing everywhere in * is beautiful!
It is unforgettable for me to take a vacation in *!I think it well be my the sweetest memories!
第一句我已经知道了,但我改成My dream was coming true.可不可以?