检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误I will spend my summer holiday in Beijing.It is the capital city of china.There are a lot of famous and interesting places.The most famous place is the great wall.It is very beautiful.I want to climb up to it first.Then I will visit the Forbidden City.I also want to visit Bei Hai park.If the is clear I will climb up to baita and see the whole park.I will stay there for two days.I think it would be a wonderful holiday

没有单词拼写错误，不过有一处要改
if the is clear,应该为if it is clear.

capital city 不要city capital 本来就是首都的意
思 加了City 反而多次一举
There are a lot of famous and interesting places
改成 There are many places of interest （名胜古迹）
I want to climb up to it first 改成
I want to climb it up 代词要放在动词和介词
中间
If the is clear 改为 If there is clean
clear是清晰的意思 clean 是干净
climb up to baita 去掉 to
I think it would be a wonderful holiday
不能用would would是过去将来时
这里应用 will 一般将来时

the great wall - the Great Wall
climb up to it - climb up it
climb it
first. Then - first, then
Bei Hai park - Bei Hai Park
park. If - park and if
the is clear I will climb up to baita and see the whole park. - the weather is clear enough, I will climb up Bai Tower and see whole park.
it would be - it will be

China ,大写
Great Wall，大写
I want to climb up to it first. 去掉to
Bei Hai Park ,大写p
If the weather is clear I will climb up to baita and see the whole park. 加上weather

1.It is the capital city of China.China c要大写2.I want to climb up it firstly.或者用at first.去掉to3.Then I will visit the Forbidden City.故宫的英语是 the Imperial Palace.4.If the is clear I will cli...

1.Great Wall要大写
2.want to climb up to it first：its first
3.Bei Hai Park也是大写
4.it would be a wonderful holiday：would用will
5.If the is clear I will climb ···这个句子你没打全吧？the后面是什么？