Olympic Games opening ceremonyBeijing Olympic Games is very well!The opening scenes of great.2008 Performances is very good.They formed characters is excited!Chinese Painting in the Central of the playground.Is very very big!Special some people in the Chinese painting to painting.This is a very good ideas.The opening ceremony of the show China's four great inventions.Ignition ceremony are our people favorite,Li Ning Ignited a big torch.This opening ce

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Olympic Games opening ceremony
Beijing Olympic Games is very well!The opening scenes of great.2008 Performances is very good.They formed characters is excited!
Chinese Painting in the Central of the playground.Is very very big!Special some people in the Chinese painting to painting.This is a very good ideas.
The opening ceremony of the show China's four great inventions.
Ignition ceremony are our people favorite,Li Ning Ignited a big torch.
This opening ceremony of the end.
备注:此话题对本人而言过于深奥,大部分未知的奥运单词来源于网络.
里面有没有什么语病语法错误等,有没有单词拼写错误?
本人只是中学生的说...

1.special应该换成especially 尤其是
2.this is a very good idea 没有s单复数
3.The opening ceremony of the show China's four great inventions. show+of
4.Chinese Painting in the Central of the playground.Is very very big!Special some people in the 在句子前++the 表示特指的chinese painting

单词拼写倒是没什么错误,可是用的不恰当
不恰当的地方还相当的多
语法错误也不少

建议你把 中文写出来,然后大家才能帮你重新翻译哈

额,建议重新写下吧。。。和开幕式一样很中国啊

Beijing Olympic Games is very good!perfect更好They formed characters is excited!这一句里有两个动词啊 哥们……汗颜了 可以用从句 The characters that they formed is excited!Special some people in the Chi...

可以用GREAT表示好,更生动些。

The opening is great.The performance of 2008 drummer is very good.Their characters is exciting.
Chinese Painting is put in the Central of the playground.It's very very big!Some special dancers in the Chinese painting is painting.This is a very good ideas.
The opening ceremony shows the China's four great inventions.
Ignition ceremony is our people's favorite,Li Ning Ignited a big torch.
This is the end of the opening ceremony.
只能大致这么表达了。鉴于你的用词都是比较易懂的,所以也不敢改成太改头换面的。