英语作文——my dream is doctor

题目应该改成MY DREAM IS BEING A DOCTOR。

My dream is to become a doctor
我的梦想是成为医生
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你的问题也是那么“含糊”，到底希望别人帮你什么，是给你写作文的思路，还是帮你改作文的名字？

I am an ordinary person, I have an ordinary dream: Is a doctor.
Because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain.
May let the human change the health. At the same time, I believed that, will help others, own also to be able to obtain joyfully. Therefore, I hoped future I might be a doctor.

my dream还是my ambition??

我是一个平凡的人,我有一个平凡的梦想：做一名医生.
因为医生可以让那些身受病痛折磨的人摆脱痛苦.可以让人变得健康.
同时,我认为,帮助了别人,自己也将会得到快乐.所以,我希望未来我可以做一个医生.
I am an ordinary person, I have an ordinary dream: Is a doctor.
Because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain.
May let the human change the health. At the same time, I believed that, will help others, own also to be able to obtain joyfully. Therefore, I hoped future I might be a doctor.
这个可能简单了一些,希望可以符合你的标准.
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