帮我看一下这句话的语法 Don't focus on yourself,focus on your dreamDon't focus on you,but your plan,your dream,your world.这样可以吗
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帮我看一下这句话的语法 Don't focus on yourself,focus on your dream
Don't focus on you,but your plan,your dream,your world.这样可以吗
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语法上没有问题，但是可以更简练点， Don't focus on yourself, but your dream.
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Don't focus on what you are, but what you are gonna be.
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我觉得没问题。
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没有语法错误 完全正确
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Don't focus on yourself,focus on your dream这句没啥问题
补充的那句也可以
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语法没问题，但读上去有点别扭。