英语句子,请帮我看看有没有问题,

问题描述:

英语句子,请帮我看看有没有问题,
1) No Marking :Maybe the markings were cleared after operator made the marking or operator forgot doing it
2)Defect of female screws :①IQC spot-checked the parts,casue the defect of screws were left out to assembly.
②When operator leak check used a defect of screw that just two -three whorls,so during do leak check didn’t
find the famale screws bad.
1)MZZ send replacement three parts to BBCC (2010/11/25)
2)Re-inspection the similar parts on the MZZ(2010/11/24)
3)IQC will all check the parts since next incoming batch.(2010/11/24)
4)Require operator must be accroding to SOP,do marking after the leak check.(2010/11/24)
5)The bad screw was discard,MIC enhanced management of leak check tools.(2010/11/5)

有问题哟,有写地方有点乱The bad screw was discard,discard应该是discarded,你的翻译是用什么搞的,有点像是用中文和英文生搬硬套的,)IQC will all check the parts since next incoming batch.这句也怪怪的,其他还有些不对,还是发给我原中文句子看看吧.