这是我的中译英,有没有语法错误?
问题描述：
这是我的中译英,有没有语法错误?
中文：我的导师曾在贵国留学,在那里留下一段难忘的青年时光.不知道我和我的导师,是否有这个荣幸,能和阁下一起合一个影?
英文：My advisor has studied aroad in Russia in last century,it is a beautiful young time in his memory.If my advisor and me have the honour to have a group photo taken with you?
答
My supervisor has been studying in your country when he was young, for
him that is a really memoriable time.May the two of us, my supervisor
and me, have honor to join a group photo with you?