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Depenging on the study of English this days,I who used to study mechanics have come up the method of study,for I have some ideas after the researching of the methed of studing English.I think the root of study is memory,as the memory consists of memory by understanding and memory by practice.I expected that there are hardly anyone approve of my opinion,so I will explain it.
According to the category of remenber ,we can classify method as understanding and practice,subjects which need understanding such as maths,mechanics and so on,is used to be thought that the best method of these subjects is understanding,but they do neglected that the method of understanding is the method of memory of these subjects,in the other side of the subjects such as studing piano,badminton and so on,practicing of memory is taken the most important place,for what should be understood consist of nothing ,as it has no reason,what should do to learn is just imitation.do however they do it,practise however they practise,then you will get the same result,this is the method of these subjects.to our surprise the method of studying English is the latter one,for English study is just to imitate the foreigners.understanding this,it is not hard to explain the reason that why study Grammer is ineffective,and you will soon come up with the right method of study English which is the most effective to yourself.
That is all of my opinion,though it is not show the right method of each subject ,it is very effective,as it gives you the root of study,you can come up with the most effective method which is suitable for you