英语作文、my mother`s day求修改
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英语作文、my mother`s day求修改
My mother is busy every day,She is a teacher .She teaches math.she works in the school.every morning,she making breakfast for me.she goes work at 7:30.she go to work by bike.she likes read newspaper at 2:30.in the evening .shegoes home at 6:30.she watches TV at 8:00.then goes to bed.this is my mother`s day
急.求修改.
答
你的原文有些语病,并显得凌乱.我重新整理：My mother is a teacher.She teaches math in a school.She is busy every day.Early in the morning she makes breakfast for me.She goes to work at 7:30am on her bike...