儿子的七年级英语短文求修改Jack's school day

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儿子的七年级英语短文求修改Jack's school day
Jack is a junior high school student.He likes goingg to school.Every day,he gets up at six 0'clock.He always goes to school on foot because his home close to his school.He usually has classes in the morning.Morning break start at half past ten.When the bell rings,he usually plays games with his friends.After school,he always does his homework in the evening.He usually goes to bed at eleven o'clock because the homework is very much.He often has a good time at school.

有两句有错误,be close to ,离.近,close是形容词,不能单独作谓语,because his home is close to his school,后面这句话主语是第三人称,所以动词后面要加个s,就是starts ,Morning break starts at half past ten,