求大神做英语改错!
求大神做英语改错!
After my best firend and her husband and I was having breakfast,I gave them a smile card.Then came a light bulb moment!I said,"I'm treating you two with breakfast!"They said,"No,it's okay!"But I told the waitress give me the bill,and she did.I wrap a ＄20 around a smile card and gave it to a waitress.On our way out of the restaurant his best friend wrapped other $20 around a smile card and gave it to an employee there.So,she had finished her Random Acts of Kingness!It just only takes a spark to get a fire going.
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It is very confusing,I don't think people can understand what you want to say.
After my best firend and her husband and I (1)HAD breakfast,I gave them a smile card.Then came a light bulb moment!I said,"I'm treating you two with breakfast!"They said,"No,it's okay!"But I (2) ASKED the waitress (3) to give me the bill,and she did.I (4) WRAPPED a ＄20 around a smile card and gave(5) them to (6)the waitress.On our way out of the restaurant (7)MY best friend wrapped a $20 around (8) THE smile card and gave(9)THEM to an employee there.So,she had finished her Random Acts of Kingness!It (10) only takes a spark to (11) kEEP a fire going.