(英语)高手来看这句话有无语病?
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(英语)高手来看这句话有无语病?
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My home is about 5 kilometers from school. I get up at seven o'clock.I eat a quick breakfast .Then I walk to the bus stop,the early bus takes me to school. It takes about 20 minutes.Next I walk to school.
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答
有一句你是想说你快速的吃完早饭,这句不对,应该是I eat breakfast quikly.要是都用一般现在时的话.最后一句,Next不对,应该是and then.看的出来这个应该是你自己写的 .