求英语高手给我这句话指点下有没语病
问题描述:
求英语高手给我这句话指点下有没语病
As focusing on product design and development,our company have extensive experience in using wireless for various applications.
我这么写有没有语病.我总觉得有点不顺,
答
有问题从句不对
As去掉要不改成As we focus on...