能帮我看看这句话英文说得对吗?
问题描述：
能帮我看看这句话英文说得对吗?
Mr.Wang will business trip in HK from 14 Aug 2007 to 16 Aug 2007,So he will not attend the captioned meeting.
答
这样好点
As having a business trip in HK from 14 Aug 2007 to 16 Aug 2007,Mr.Wang will not attend the captioned meeting.