英语高手帮忙改正这句话中的语病
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英语高手帮忙改正这句话中的语病
In recent years,the most emerging mergers in China are cross-industry mergers.In mergers like this,not only do the governance structure and the integrated management experience are not yet perfect and adequate,but also have many such remaining problems as the unclear stock ownership,the imperfect financial system,the disorderly-organizational structure,and the redundancy of personnel.
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lz原文表达了丰富的意思.挺好的.语法上,直接修改一处：In mergers like 【these】而不是 this,因为前面是复数的mergers.选词和表达上,几点建议：1、emerge 这个词在这里表意不是很明确.如果lz是说 known著名的 famou...