I like Spring Festival because I can spend my lucky money buying some beautiful decorations.

问题描述:

I like Spring Festival because I can spend my lucky money buying some beautiful decorations.
老师说我用spend不好,
然后我就改成了I can buy some beautiful decorations for myself with my luck money from my elders
不过原句究竟不好在哪?

个人觉得你写句子的时候用了中文的思维,I can spend my lucky money buying some beautiful decorations.这句话没有必要用两个动词spend和
buy.改成I can buy some beautiful decorations with my lucky money .可能会好些诶
你改后的那句话也是同样的问题from my elders是多余的