I make a plan to use my vacation.First I want to visit some sightseeings,because I want to study mo求中文make a plan to use my vacation.First I want to visit some sightseeings,because I want to study more about history.Then I will return to grandparents' home to have a great spring festival,and I can get some money from them,and I can spend happy time with them,although I can make them very happy.Oh!What a good plan I think!
I make a plan to use my vacation.First I want to visit some sightseeings,because I want to study mo
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make a plan to use my vacation.First I want to visit some sightseeings,because I want to study more about history.Then I will return to grandparents' home to have a great spring festival,and I can get some money from them,and I can spend happy time with them,although I can make them very happy.Oh!What a good plan I think!
UES 用SPEND或者enjoy，比较好enjoy好点。或者改成make a plan for my vacation。。然后 spend happy time 用have 比较好。have a happy time with them.还有although 连接那2个句子不好。这个是表示转折的。换成句子或者其他单词吧。。MOREOVER也许可以。
为了度过我的假期,我制定了一个计划.首先我想去观光旅游,因为我想多了解一些历史.之后我将回到爷爷奶奶家度过一个快乐的春节,而且我还会从他们那里得到一些压岁钱,还能和他们一起度过快乐的时光,我想我能让他们很开...