能不能帮我看一下这份英文自我介绍还可以吗?

能不能帮我看一下这份英文自我介绍还可以吗?
Good afternoon. It is really a great honor to have the opportunity for this interview. My name is ***. I’m a sophomore major in English at *** University. With tremendous interest in English interpretation, I sent application to your company.
I have a habit of making plans so that I can manage my time effectively. Last summer holiday, I got my first internship as an assistant; Last December, I managed to be the Expo volunteer. And now, I’m striving to be a member of your team. I am a person with stable personality and high sense of responsibility. I fear no risks and never confused by any interference because I am bright and dedicated. Although I am a freshman in the field of interpretation, I am aggressive to learn and progress.
I’m the leader of English corner at college. I want to help more friends get interested in English. Vocabulary can be accumulated; the sense of language can be cultivated. My English is not 100% fluent, but I ‘m improving and that is what every outstanding interpreter has experienced.
Given a chance to work for your company, I will try my best to make contributions and prove that your investment is a smart choice.
Thank you very much for your attention!