帮我修改篇英语自我介绍
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帮我修改篇英语自我介绍
内容Good afternoon,my dear taechers and schoolmates.My name is .I come from .You can see I was little fat.Because i am very like cooking and eating.I like eat delicous foods ,suah as pasta,pizza and so on.But i also like sports.So when i knew the Olympic Games will hold in Beijing.I was very exciting.I want to be a volunteer in 2008 to help the games.This is my little gream.I hope it will be true.Thank you!
帮我修改一下看有没有什么错误．多谢了!
答
YOU CAN SEE I AM A BIT FAT
BECAUSE I LOVE COOKING AND EATING
I LIKE NICE FOOD, SUCH AS PASTA, PIZZA,再想一个,AND SO ON 要三个以上用的.
BUT I LIKE SPORTS AS WELL.
I WANNA BE A VOLUNTEER IN 2008.
THIS IS ONE OF MY DREAMS
I HOPE IT WILL COME TRUE