请英语高手来帮我看看这句话有没语病?

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请英语高手来帮我看看这句话有没语病?
If god was willing give me a opportunity,I could face all people and sang ,I'm sorry.
不好意思弄错了
应该是say的

1) was willing 应为 were willing TO,典型的虚拟语气;2) a opportunity 应为 an opportunity,冠词错误;3)最后的引语加引号.4)face ... and say 典型的中式英文所以,全句应为:If god were willing to give ...