英语作文my hobby(小学),

My Hobby
I like drawing.It does bring me happiness.
As a kid,I was keen on those lines and curves drawn on paper made into animals and scenes.It really could show beauty to people and express my feelings.And then I took a course so that I could get close to it and see it well.But at that time,I just did it for fun.
Years went by,I got into a long period of time filled with pressure in study.And I found it so good a way to relax.It did not any longer play an unimportant role in my living,but bacame my friend.
Since that time,I have felt it like a nice person deep in my heart who can talk with me with true words and make me happy with life.This is my hobby,not just a hobby,but also a true friend.
My hobby
My hobby is lisetening to music.
I like listening to music best.Because listening to music makes me relaxed.When I am tired,I will listening some quiet music,that makes me fall asleep very quickly.My favorite music is the music that has good lyrics.Good lyrics can also make me learn Chinese or English well
I love listening to music.I will keep this hobby forever.
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