帮忙看看我写的这句英语对吗

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帮忙看看我写的这句英语对吗
Every college freshman will be confronted with the choice of living alone or living with roommates where there are different views .

你写的这句话是有语病的.主要是关系副词前面没有合适的先行词,所以需要修改关系副词where改为关系代词who.修改如下:
Every college freshman will be confronted with the choice whether
living alone or living with roommates who have different views.
如有不懂可以追问哈,我是英语专业毕业的