英语作文帮我评评分和改正下`拜托!
问题描述：
英语作文帮我评评分和改正下`拜托!
My favourite animal
My favourite animal is dog,so I got a dog from my parents when at my 13 birthday.
My families all call it CiCi.It has two big eyes,a small nose and two sharp ears.CiCi wears a brown clothes and a big round cycle in it.It looks very lovely!It always walks around and around at home and sometimes makes us laugh.It likes eating bones better.It doesn’t like to eat chocolate or vegetables.But CiCi has a bad habit——That’s she so is shy to somebody!
I love my dog.I’ll take good care of it.
我不知道我这篇作文写得怎样,*发挥的,如果满分为10分,那我该得多少啊?哪里错帮我改正下啊,
答
That’s she so is shy to somebody!这句话有问题吧～应该改为That’s she is so shy to somebody!不知是你打错还是……?
其他的都还好啦,应该可以评上9分～
祝你以后的作文能写的更精彩～