英语翻译

问题描述:

英语翻译
1.影片描述了一个小男孩是怎样变成百老汇明星的过程.
2.电影的产生带给我们更多的乐趣.
我想知道我的翻译哪里有错:
1.The movie described the process how a boy becomes a singer of Broadway.
2.The production of movie brings us more entertainments.
伴我看看哪里错了,主要是主谓一致有没有错.

主谓一致没问题,时态和用词有些小错哈,完善后是:1.The movie described the process how a boy became a singer in Broadway.2.The invention of movies brings us more entertainment.