英语句子表达正确与否,求改
问题描述：
英语句子表达正确与否,求改
the more confidence a person is,the broadener horizon and the more developed ability he will gain,so that more easly when it comes to accumulate ones' wealth,establish ones' career and attain social status
答
The more confident and the broader vision the person are,the stronger ability he will gain,so the easier it will be to accumulate his wealth,establish his career and attain social status.