麻烦帮我看看,这段英语有没有错误

麻烦帮我看看,这段英语有没有错误
Good morning,everyone!It is really my honor to have this opportunity for an interview.I hope I can make a good performance today.I'm confident that I can succeed.Now I will introduce myself briefly.I graduated from Qingdao University.My major is about material.And I got my bachelor degree after my graduation in the year of 2011.I spent most of my time on study,and I’ve passed CET-4 during my university.In March 2011,I began working for a company named Wuhu Conch.I am 23 years old,born in Ningbo.So I love everything and everybody in here.And that's why I came back in May 2012.
That’s all.Thank you for giving me the chance.