In China ,parents ofen force thier kids to study .What’s more,the kids is very tired and busy to do their homework.The k
问题描述：
In China ,parents ofen force thier kids to study .What’s more,the kids is very tired and busy to do their homework.The kids have no spaire time to play with other kids.The burden for kids is very heavy.
这有什么语法错误.请都给指出来.急.
答
第一个is 改为are恩。还有呢。。very改为toovery改为too我知道be busy doing 但是如果改成too 意思就有点不一样了。还有什么更好的改法吗？还有啥错误吗？给好评的。。