30年后我的生活 英语作文 -初二水平的

What your dream?I think I will becom a teacher in 30 years old.And there will have many robots,so people need't do many work ,robot will do thoes dangrous work .But there will have more pollution and few trees ,more people will come to countrysides,becaus the air will more fresh than countries ,few people will drave car .Many people go to the moon ,there are too many people on the earth.Studants won't go to school ,becaus teacher will give studants class on computers ,studants alos do homework on computers,so we need't have too many books .I really think we will have a good life in the future .Do you agree with me?
希望有用可以修改一下吗 -主要是围绕着我自己而写的 -写职业啊 -工作 居住地 -周末干什么这样子的行I think I will becom a teacher in 30 years. I with my family will live in a modern apartment in New York,it is built in the sky. I need't go to school for my work like our teachers, we will give students classes on computers,and students will give their homework use computers,it will become more easy. On the weekend, robots will help me do housework, then I will go to countrysides with my family , because the country is too darty, but the countryides is beautiful and have fresh air. I also oftan go to moon for a trip . I reallythinkwewillhaveagood lifeinthefuture . Do you agreewith me?