英语作文 有语病么
问题描述：
英语作文 有语病么
This is a photo of Tom's room.It's not big but nice.There are many pictures on the wall .The desk is near the window,and the bookcase is near the desk.There are many books in the bookcase .Besid the bookcase.there is a bed.There ae mny CDs on it .Near the bed ,there is a table.There is an clock and a computer on it .Where are Tom's shoes?Look!They are on the floor.
答
Besid the bookcase.there is a bed.There ae mny CDs on it .Near the bed ,there is a table.这几句像中国式英语= =
clock前的不定冠词应该用a
There ae mny CDs on it .many不知识楼主打错了还是真写错了
建议楼主再写点别的句式,不要只用there be句型,Tom的房间里还有别的可以描写,比如说：Tom often listens to music in the room.