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帮 我看一下文章有没有错误 急
We had a Military Training last wee-k.We were very happy when we heard t-he news because it is our first time
to live for a short time without our parents.We were all excited.But when we arrived at the training base,we f-ound that every-thing was changed.We had to wash the dishes,wash the clot-hes and make the bed on our own.We n-
eeded to get up and go to bed in reg-ular time.It was so boring.Even we c-ouldn't talk to each other in the sl-eping time.The food of the dining ha-ll is so bad.We have no snack because it couldn't be brought.I really miss-ed my mother very much.I wanted go h-ome.I often felt tired all the day r-ound.The training was too tiring and
the drill master was too stern.But a-fter 7 days ,I was surprised to found
that I became more adamant than befo-re.I felt so happy.
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