帮我改病句子!

问题描述:

帮我改病句子!
we would learn more by seeing foreign news,getting new info,reading in web.
we would also listen to musices,watch matchs,play games when we are bored.
if we want to buy sth,we can directly buy on internet.
不知道并列句怎么写.
也不知道复数怎么用
憋屈
我们可以利用因特网看国外的新闻,获取最新的信息.在网上阅读各种书籍,从而学习到更多.我们觉得无聊的时候,我们还能听听音乐,或者观看体育比赛,或者玩游戏.如果我们想购物的话,我们还可以通过因特网直接购物.

We can not only obtain the latest information by watching foreign news through the Internet,but also absorb more knowledge by reading various books on the web.When we feel bored,we can listen to some music,watch a sports match,as well as play games.If we are in the mood for some shopping,it is convenient to buy whatever we want on the Internet.

直接翻的 不过不是完全直译 不是很清楚你的并列和复数是想指什么……