帮忙改一下这篇英语作文,语法错误,标点符号错误,什么意见都可以提.
帮忙改一下这篇英语作文,语法错误,标点符号错误,什么意见都可以提.
My opinion on Japanese earthquake
On 2011,3.11st,an earthquake happened to Japanese.It damaged millions of houses,killed many people and,the most unluckily,it cause serious nuclear leak.During the process of repairing the Nuclear Power plant,some workers were killed by radiation.The nuclear leak happened because of people still use the Nuclear Power plant though it is overdue.
As a kind of clean energy,nuclear energy is more environmentally friendly.It produces less pollutants and more energy.In another hand,the use of nuclear is more dangerous.It can cause more serious disaster.If we make use of new energy in the right way,new energy will make our life more convenient.
In the future new energy must be used more and more widely.People should pay attention to the safety to let new energy please their life.
My opinion on Japanese earthquake
On March 11st,2011,an earthquake happened in Japan,which has destoried millions of houses and killed many people.Most unfortunately,it has caused serious nuclear leak.During the process of repairing the Nuclear Power plant,some workers were killed by radiation.The nuclear leak resulted from the Nuclear Power plant which were still in use by some people though it was overdue.
As a kind of clean energy,nuclear energy is environmentally friendly.It produces less pollutions and more energy.Besides,the use of nuclear is becoming more dangerous than before.It may cause serious disasters.But,as long as we make use of new energy in the right way,it will surely bring convenience to our lives.
In the near future,new energy will play an improtant role in our lives.Therefore,we should pay more attention to the safe use of new energy in order to make our life pleasant.
有问题可以继续问的.如果我说，we can use it to listern to music ,[to]take photos, [to] take photos, [to] surf on the internet and even [to] watch TV programs.方框中的to可以省略吗？还是一定要加呢？to 不可省略的，因为to listern to music ,to take photos, to surf on the internet， to watch TV programs是并列的，即we can use it to listen to music; we can use it to take photos...这样的。