帮忙改一下这篇英语作文,语法错误,标点符号错误,什么意见都可以提.My opinion on Japanese earthquake On 2011,3.11st,an earthquake happened to Japanese.It damaged millions of houses,killed many people and,the most unluckily,it cause serious nuclear leak.During the process of repairing the Nuclear Power plant,some workers were killed by radiation.The nuclear leak happened because of people still use the Nuclear Power plant though it is overdue.As a kind of clean energy,nuclear energy is

帮忙改一下这篇英语作文,语法错误,标点符号错误,什么意见都可以提.
My opinion on Japanese earthquake
On 2011,3.11st,an earthquake happened to Japanese.It damaged millions of houses,killed many people and,the most unluckily,it cause serious nuclear leak.During the process of repairing the Nuclear Power plant,some workers were killed by radiation.The nuclear leak happened because of people still use the Nuclear Power plant though it is overdue.
As a kind of clean energy,nuclear energy is more environmentally friendly.It produces less pollutants and more energy.In another hand,the use of nuclear is more dangerous.It can cause more serious disaster.If we make use of new energy in the right way,new energy will make our life more convenient.
In the future new energy must be used more and more widely.People should pay attention to the safety to let new energy please their life.