帮忙看看两个英语句子有错吗?

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帮忙看看两个英语句子有错吗?
1.Despite the fact that success can not be easily attained,many people try to figure out the way to attain their own, resulting in two opposite opinions of succeeding.resulting in 前面是不是少什么东西?
2.whoever want to succeed needs to make plans in detail to make sure everything is on track. 能去掉is吗?谢!

1.Despite the fact that success can not be easily attained,many people try to figure out the way to attain their own,resulting in two opposite opinions of succeeding.resulting in 前面是不是少什么东西?
不少,resulting及其后面的成分做前半句的结果状语,此时resulting的逻辑主语就是前半句这件事,整个结构相当于...,which results in two.
2.whoever want to succeed needs to make plans in detail to make sure everything is on track.能去掉is吗?谢!
make sure (that) everything is on track
这是个that引导的宾语从句,that本身省略了;is是从句谓语动词,不能省.