Dear teacher,I am a student who came to the Psychological Center on last week.Under your carefully help,I have successfully get out of confusion.I would like to extend my greatest appreciate for your help.There was a time I always felt confused and over-burdened.You teach me when we are facing challenges we should embrace the strong faith that we are indomitable and invincible.Our only emery is ourselves.I appreciate the opportunity of being your stud
Dear teacher,
I am a student who came to the Psychological Center on last week.Under your carefully help,I have successfully get out of confusion.I would like to extend my greatest appreciate for your help.
There was a time I always felt confused and over-burdened.You teach me when we are facing challenges we should embrace the strong faith that we are indomitable and invincible.Our only emery is ourselves.
I appreciate the opportunity of being your student.The experience will be unforgettable throughout my life.Now I am a confident girl who feels the world more beautiful than I ever seen.Please accept my sincerely gratitude.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
没发现什么问题,挺不错的.
Dear teacher,
I am a student who just came to the Psychological Center last week. With your careful help, I have successfully gotten out of confusion. I would like to extend my greatest appreciation for your help.
There was a time when I always felt confused and over-burdened.You taught me,in the face of challenges, we should embrace the strong faith that we are indomitable and invincible. Our only enemey is ourselves.
I appreciate the opportunity of being your student. The experience will be unforgettable throughout my life. Now I am a confident boy who feels the world much more beautiful than I have ever seen. Please accept my sincerely gratitude.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
错的很多 很多中式英语
last week 前面的on去掉
在某人的帮助下要用介词with 不能用under
carefully改成careful
I have successfully gotten
时态问题要注意 你的时态很混乱
enemy拼写错了
我觉得世界比我之前所看到的更加美丽，这句话翻译的很不对，完全中式英语
可以改成 who thinks that the world is more beautiful than I have ever seen
最后一句就不符合英语的习惯了，一般不会说请接收我的感激，直接thank you就好了
Dear 名字.,
I am a student who came to the Psychological Center last week. Getting Benefit from your warm help, I have successfully get out of confusion. I would like to extend my greatest appreciate for your help.
There was a time I always felt confused and over-burdened.You teach me when we are facing challenges thatwe should embrace the strong faith that we are indomitable and invincible. Our only emery is ourselves.
I appreciate the opportunity of being your student. The experience will be unforgettable throughout my life. Now I am a confident girl who feels the world more beautiful than I ever seen. Please accept my sincerely gratitude.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
Dear teacher,
I am a student who came to the Psychological Center【去掉on】 last week. 【Under改成With】 your 【carefully改成careful】 help, I have successfully get out of confusion. I would like to extend my greatest 【appreciate 改appreciation】 for your help.
There was a time I always felt confused and over-burdened.You teach me when 【we are可省略】 facing challenges we should embrace the strong faith that we are indomitable and invincible. Our only 【emery改成enemy】 is ourselves.
I appreciate the opportunity of being your student. The experience will be unforgettable throughout my life【建议改成 This will be unforgettable experience of my life】. Now I am a confident girl who feels the world more beautiful than I 【加 have】ever seen. Please accept my sincerely gratitude.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
第一句去掉on，I would like to extend my ...for your help.这一句 I do appreciate it. 就可以。 You teach me 后面加上that ,第一段最后一句enemy拼写错误。 I appreciate the opportunity最好改成I am so glad to have the opportunity to be your ... 。 feels the world more beautiful than before就可以。
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