请帮我看看这句英文中有没有语法错误或者修改得更地道When the wing has glided the place,was already not the beginning .
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请帮我看看这句英文中有没有语法错误或者修改得更地道
When the wing has glided the place,was already not the beginning .
答
有
glide是不及物动词,应按照意思适当加上介词,如over,across.
(推荐用glide over“掠过”)
was前加上it
the beginning前加in或不加也行
（the beginning 指开始；in the beginning 指在开始的时候）
When the wing has glided over the place,it was already not (in) the beginning意思是“当翅膀掠过那个地方时,那已经不是（在）开始（的时候）了”