求教英语帝 看看这段话有没有什么语法错误Very glad to meet you.first of all,I start to introduce myself.My name is vivien come here,I choose this major reason is because I like it,it fully reflects the service tenet,in two years' study,I have mastered some professional knowledge,learning at the same time,I also actively participate in school activities,holiday for work-study,hope to study and work at times嗯嗯 其实这个不是我写的那 我一个朋友叫我帮他问问的 我也看不懂

Glad to meet you.
first of all, let me introduce myself.
My name is vivien
The reason I chose this major is that I like it.
The major fully reflects the service tenet
During the two years, I have mastered some professional skill.
At the same time, I have participated it in the school activities.
这句话看不懂：holiday for work-study,
这句很奇怪：hope to study and work at times

My name is vivien come here
这句不对啊,错的忒离谱了
I choose this major reason is because I like it
应：I choose this mainly because I like it
或：The major reason I choose this is because I like it