英语翻译

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英语翻译
现如今,金融危机席卷全球,许多知名企业纷纷倒闭,包括一些世界五百强企业.这是对企业生命力的严峻考验,在这次金融风暴下幸存下来的企业,都有着强力的生命力.而企业生命力,也表现在很多方面,比如,企业的创新.大多数的企业,对创新有投资,但却没有回报,也就是说,创新的东西没有创造利润.那么,创新和企业效益方面,究竟有着怎么样的关系已经是许多企业关心的话题,而如何将创新的成果转化成利润也是每个创新企业面临的课题,论文以Apple公司为例,分析Apple公司各种创新带来了利弊,以及由创新引发的市场、消费者、企业之间的关系,在分析基础上,对我国企业创新动力不足提出意见和建议.希望我国企业对创新的态度有所改观,从而使企业能够长足发展.
我不需要在线翻译或者软件翻译的回答,

上面的两个绝对是机器翻译!下面是我翻译的,虽然尽力了,但是应该有个别要修改的地方.
Nowdays ,the world financial crisis sweeping through out of the world,a great number of famous enterprises have bankrupted ,including some of the Fortune 500 enterprises .This is a ordeal for enterprise bionergy .the survivor enterprises of this fiancial crisis have powerful vitality .The enterprise bionergy presented in many aspects,such as innovation .A lot of engterprises put investment on innovation ,but they have not get terurn from this .That is to say ,the innovation did not created profit .So ,it is a common problem for many enterprises that what is the specific connection between the innovation and profit .It is also a common issue that how to convert the production of innovation to profit .This thesis(paper 也可以) take the Apple company as example ,analyzed all kinds of advantages and disadvantages of the Apple company's innovation and the relationship among the market ,consumer ,and enterprises .Besed on this analysis,I have raised some opinions and advise for Chinese enterprises for their lake of innovation .I hope that Chinese enterprises bring forth new ideas for innovation ,and furtherance of the national ecnomic well-being .
几个关键词:
500强企业:Fortune 500 enterprises
企业生命力:enterprise bionergy
严峻的考验:ordeal
创新:innovation
利弊:advantages and disadvantages
提建议:raise
以……..为例:take…..as example
促进经济发展:furtherance of the national ecnomic well-being .
你再修改下吧,我花了40分钟啊.