求大神用英语写篇小短文

Would u like to look after ur family in urban areas or country areas?Some people claim that urban maybe better than countries to living whereas opponents argue that countries is more quiet and clean thus are more better than cities.Personally,I hold the idea that urban areas is more ideal than countries to look after families.
To begin with,it's obvious that urban foundational facilities are perfection.Like schools and hospitals,people who living in cities are more easily to access to these essential facilities than people living in countries.Moreover,urban transportation system and water-supply system and etc are all more perfect than that in countries.Therefore,living in urban areas is more convenient,it's certain that cities is a ideal places to look after families.
Moreover,people who living in cities will find that there are far more opportunities given in urban areas.Like occupation opportunities,for cities continuous expand,more jobs will need for cities.And more opportunities means more people could get jobs and make a living.Stable job will help to look after families.
Although some people claim that countries are more quiet and clean but compared with urban areas,it's certain that facilities and opportunities are more essential to look after families.
In conclusion,due to urban areas' foundational facilities are more perfect and there are more opportunities in cities.I hold the idea that urban areas are ideal place to look after families.
我是认为城市好,结构是总-分观点1-分观点2-让步段-总结.
英语水平有限,可能会有语法和拼写错误,望见谅,哈哈