请评价一篇英语作文（小学六年级）
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请评价一篇英语作文（小学六年级）
A fire
At about 10p.m.When the fire broke out at Grand View Court on Caine Road.We don't the cause of the fire .200 firemen helped fight the fire.Two of firemen were hurt and two of residents were killed.They used Three helicopter and nine ladders.The firemen put out the fire at about 1:00am
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A fire
At about 10p.m.When the fire broke out at Grand View Court on Caine Road. We don't KNOW the cause of the fire .200firemen helped TO fight the fire. Two of firemen were hurt and two of residents were killed. They used Three helicopterS and nine ladders.The firemen put out the fire at about 1:00am
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