Look,that is Lin Yichen.and her English name is Ariel.She is 28 years old.But I don't think she is

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Look,that is Lin Yichen.and her English name is Ariel.She is 28 years old.But I don't think she is
old.写的有没有错的地方.(除标点符号以外)

Look,that is Lin Yichen,and her English name is Ariel.She is 28 years old.But I don't think she is old.
除了标点,没有别的错
我英语六级水平.