希望高手纠正一下我的英文作文

希望高手纠正一下我的英文作文
随着如今像iphone手机或安卓手机等的智能手机在全球化的普及.很多科技公司开始尝试将一些日常使用的普通随身事物融入高科技,改造成类似于微型电脑的智能设备.在wiki百科上,这种产品被称为“Wearable technology”,并有如下定义“.”打给比方来说,摩托罗拉就曾上市销售过一款类似于手机的智能设备,“MOTOACTV”.他能像手表一样的戴在手上,并且几乎具备了一款电子手表该有的所有功能.同时,使用蓝牙联接手机后,你便可以不使用手机来查看一些手机上的提示信息.除此之外,这个手机的重要功能就是在你进行诸如“跑步”,“骑单车”运动时,对你的运动数据进行统计,并将它们上传到网络.在将来,类似的产品将会越来越多.它们不仅仅只是提升我们的生活,而是改善我们的生活.
With the popularity of the smart phone such as iphone or Android phone in the world.A lot of technology company try to combining the normal things which people may be carrying everyday such as glass,watch,shoes with new high technique just like a micro-computer.On the wiki page,these kinds of products called "Wearable technology",and the definition is "Wearable technology,tech togs,or fashion electronics are clothing and accessories incorporating computer and advanced electronic technologies." For example,Motorola sold a product named "MOTOACTV".You can wear it like a watch,and it has almost all the functionality which electronic watches have.When you connect the phone to this machine by bluetooth,you can check the notify from your phone by this machine.In addition,its main function was to collect the statistics when you are doing some sports like runing or riding and upload to network.In the future,more and more similar products will go on sale.It will not only improve our life,but also change our life.
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