英语作文看有无语病

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英语作文看有无语病
I think write dairys in English will be a good way to lead off my worriment.And few people will understand it so that they won't worry about me.Therefore,I will start to write.
Labour Day will be coming soon,a lot of people have prepared to go home.I miss my family very much,but I won't go home.My mother said it was not necessary to go home and there was only three days off.She said it was too tired to seat over four hours on bus.So,I decided to stay at school.
英语太烂想练习下,从简单的语句开始…

1、应该是diary不是dairy2、第2句第1个will应该改成would,won't改成dont3、she said it was too tired to seat over four hours on bus 应该改成she said it would be too tiring to sit on a bus for four hours.4...