英语作文(短文已写好,看看有什么问题,We have many after-class clubs for you.We have science club,biology club,music club...Come and join us,please!(你会选择上面哪个课外活动小组呢?为什么?用英语写篇短文):I want to join the music club.Because I like music best and I like listenning to music.I think music is relaxing and I want to learn about music.I want to sing very well.What club do you want to join?

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英语作文(短文已写好,看看有什么问题,
We have many after-class clubs for you.We have science club,biology club,music club...Come and join us,please!(你会选择上面哪个课外活动小组呢?为什么?用英语写篇短文):
I want to join the music club.Because I like music best and I like listenning to music.I think music is relaxing and I want to learn about music.I want to sing very well.What club do you want to join?

太短了吧。你也可以写写 你喜欢怎样的音乐,比如classical music,jazz,pop,rock,或者techno.再写写这种音乐的特点。写写你喜欢的乐器也不错哦

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We have many after-class clubs, such as science club, biology club, music culb... Come and join us, please!
I like music best, because listening to music is relaxing, so I want to join the music club. In this club, I believe that I can learn more about music and I also want to sing very well.Waht club do you want to join?

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没有问题.

不知道你想要写什么,总之都可以改。
We have many clubs for our students, one of you can find them for science, biology, and music, if interested, join us now!
I want to join the music club because I like listenning music, and it is always make me feel relax. At the same time, I want to learn and sing it in the club. So what about you?