有没有哪里错了,语法或者形式?
有没有哪里错了,语法或者形式?
Dear Sir,
Thank you for your enquiry of yesterday for our refrigertors.Our refrigertors are quite popular because they are superior in quality and moderate in price.In reply to your enquiry,we take popular in making you an offer as follows:
Quantity:good
Price:USD10
Payment Terms:L/C
Shipment:next month
We feei you may be interested in some of out other products and enclosed herewith please find some booklets for your reference.
We look forward to receiving you order.
Yours faithfully,
Topsell Import & Export
Albert
第一行的of 去掉.
quantity 意思是数量,怎么后面是good?
原文中应是refrigerator,你拼错了.
没有take popular in making you an offer 这种句式.不知道你要表达什么.
你把feel 拼成了feei .并且此处改为hope 比较好.other products 前面的out 似乎应改成 our
从enclosed 开始到句尾,完全不通.
最后一句应为：your order.